Smaked back to the real world.
Multiple times I've told you- I'm not your girl.
Arranging my life as you wanted it,
Cornering me into a bottomless pit.
King of the house, or as you thought,
Even without noticing my tears that dropped.
Do you know- you're not my boss.
Breaking my heart several times,
Also checking to see if I was alive.
Changing the way the rules went,
Kicking me back to my old life- sent.
Together we are- in a rebel against you,
On the days that we laugh and say you're a fool.
Really, do you think, you could make me die?
Even though in my heart I still wonder why,
All you did was tell me I was not good enough
Lying to prove that you are most tough.
It's been so long since I've seen you,
Though I don't depend on seeing you soon.
You think you could make my thoughts change- untrue.
SMACKED BACK TO REALITY
Author notes
this is about my stepdad. He was the one with the power. He was the one with the strengh, the capability.
Yet, he thought he could break me.
Not my best piece of work, my first acrostic poem.
SO BE NICE.
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awww hunny this is so sad, i am sorry you had to go through, but i am glad you said strong.
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yay! i love acrostics! and this is why. because, its so beautiful. this was like perfect, the flow was there and it made sense and there was emotions running down your lines. awesome enjoyed the read, keep penning
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WONDERFUL WELL DONE I STILL
LOVE THIS POEM YOU ARE ONE
OF THE BEST POEM WRITTERS I
EVER MET KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Justin a.k.a. WickedDefyingGravity
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I wanted to come comment on your poem page, rather than just your member of the month page. This is deep and strong - well done!
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A very good acrostic, Pandy. They aren't the easiest thing to make sound natual and not forced but you did a good job on this one.
And congratulations on being poet of the month
Dee
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This was a wonderful acrostic. Well done
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Very good job for an acrostic! It wasn't forced or anything. It's really impressive for your age, also. When I was 14 I was writing stuff much worse than this.
It's extremely tragic, and after reading your page I can understand why. I hope poetry helps you get this darkness out of you. You're too young to have this kind of horror.
Wonderful job, and keep writing!
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Aw, lol I just wrote a acrostic poem myself. That's funny. You did so good in expressing yourself. It's sooo sad.
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