fire red sands send her heart
on winged western winds
to catch a glimpse of love
outside our fingertips
beyond all fathomable scripts
ocean green wrinkles on memories
cling tight for the whole caress
to stand vigilantly calm behind
this perpetual present in presence
life, the passing of love's essence
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND by Tam.
900 points, ended November 11, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow this is an encredible poem... i guess i hadnt read it till now. cheers to you... i love this
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Now, this blows my mind! I have missed your muse my friend. Your very first line is emotionally sound, a stunning metaphor. Congratulations on your Honorable Mention.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Wow...
very creative take on the prompt! Well done.
This is a beautiful poem that does not require any images added...this poem stands on it's own merit...
Wonderful and moving!
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me!
Blessings! Tammy
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nice poem I don't see the pic however
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