Strolling along one day
As the birds chirp
Gleefully flying around the way
Doing their busy work
Stand and ponder suddenly
Much to my surprise
A bird flies up next to me
And I spit between its eyes
Kick a duck on the ground
Laughing with delight
Maybe club a penguin
They're birds without flight
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what the F**k!
what the fu*k is this s*it, I am sorry I am no writer I come to read and comment but this poem is pathetic. Its not funny, has no point and you slag off people who actually do good ones. You need your head testing because you are seriously messed up. Kicking ducks and clubbing penguins, what do you shag them too? Please do take you pieces of cr*p and shove them somewhere because this is not even worth the screen space. OMG!! words fail me literally and what aload of balls you really have typed, if this is what you do in your spare time I suggest you find another hobbie because you are fu*king awful at it. Have a nice day. -
this too me is rhymn its forced it has no flow and if i was you i would stop writing poetry take a look at the rubbish you are turning out and through away your key board because my friend you aint no writer... i was going to say to you if you cant say nothing nice dont say it atall but screw that and oh i nearly forgot have a nice day... (:
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What's "rhymn"? It's "throw away your keyboard" not "through away your key board". Aint no is a triple negative I think. Can't say nothing is a double negative. At all is two words. You didn't even make the smiley face at the end right. By the way, if you haven't noticed I'm just doing this poetry thing to pass the time. There is no deeper meaning because I don't need there to be one. The poems don't have anguish because I'm an over all happy person. Plus, you're kind of starting to seem like you've got sand in your vagina.
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all i can say is the best of luck to you... cos you sure aint going to be a writer... and if your a happy person why give others your horrid remarks a bit ironic if you ask me... and happy ppl dont kick ducks you know nothing about poetry and you attack me on a poem i wrote which took less than 3 mins to write you wouldn't no what poetry was if it jumpped up and slapped your face which im guessing is coverd in spots
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funny it is. evil is too. welcome to allpoetry, and stay away from the penguins. PENGUINS ROCK!!!
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