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Catz stands up for a late snack adventure



Dee and her cat
growl and meow in the kitchen
late snack



spilled milk
licking Dee's foot
her cat


back to bed
the lady and her cat
one empty stomach




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Lucky cat!!! He got and Dee didn't!
The cat background is gone, try believe that thing there is a cat lol

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  • echo-ink
    February 27
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    cute, funy,
    I liked this, um...these.
    Thanks for entering,


  • myron silver member
    December 17, 2007

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    amusing

    this is an amusing haiku/senryu sequence. cats know how to make the best of every situation, don't they?perhaps they are buddhists, lol...
    thanks for sharing it with us and congratulations on being an honourable winner.

    season's greetings,
    myron.


  • Ellis gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    It's understood,
    This is quite good,
    A poem that is
    On a cat, like this.

    Tiki Cat
    World's Greatest Poet


  • Hinemoa silver member
    November 12, 2007
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    OHH good ones Gaze.
    Hine


  • leander Moderators member
    November 12, 2007
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  • angelica silver member
    November 11, 2007

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    Dear Gaze,
    Great Haiku's relating to Dee's cat's, and yes, I did have to take two pairs of the King's best trousers to the drycleaners to be cleaned. What a right mess they made without Dee there to care for them.


  • hugh wyles silver member
    November 11, 2007

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    Meu carissimo filha, Aziram,

    I hope you've recovered from your terrible ordeal following the loss of the good ship "Jellyfish" and the discovery of the shocking truth about Ima Q. Cumber which was revealed in the final episode.
    Thankyou for entering this contest for Catz and more cats.
    They (the cats) are actually not very popular at Huguelot just now because, while Dee has been unable to look after them and keep them controlled, they have left cat-splat on the throne-seat which resulted in HoH having to take two pairs of the King's best trousers to be drycleaned.
    It just goes to prove that
    you should never ask a diplomat
    especially a democrat
    to operate a Photostat
    since jumping Jo Jehosophat
    dismissed the secretariat
    for not allowing Montserrat
    to warble the Magnificat....

    OOOPS! Sorry, I just wanted to say I enjoyed your feline haiku but the word "cat" got me thinking (which I have been repeatedly warned never to do) and one thing led to another.
    Anyway, good luck in the voting. Applause!

    Com muito amor, abracos e beijos XXX
    Con mucho carino, abrazos y bezos, mi querida hija, XXX
    El padre, Hugh (R.)


  • wattle silver member
    November 11, 2007

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    Ha -- Pets have a way with speech that we who use words can only understand and can't understand. ---- Lovely Ms Gaze ---- Thank you.


  • trista gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    Oh, I can relate to this poem a lot. lol I think our cats eat much better than we do. Or at least a lot more often. Good luck in the contest, I really enjoyed this.

    Best wishes,
    ~J.


  • Maureen silver member
    November 10, 2007

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    Dear Mariza,

    Interesting set of haikus (or that other Chinese word)! There are times when my two cats stomachs are full and mine goes empty (but that's only when I'm very tired and only get up so they'll stop bugging me).

    Best of Luck in the contest!

    Maureen


  • catz Moderators member
    November 10, 2007

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    About the background... With half of me stilll being partly numb, that image on there looks a lot like I feel... you know that 'fat' feeling you get in an area that's been numb and barely starting to go away.


    Dee

  • catz Moderators member
    November 10, 2007
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    Lol... that would be me, yep. spilled milk makes happy cat and I guess I didn't need the late snack anyway. My aim isn't so good right now. Maybe I could give Sal a break... get a dog AND a cat... no more cleaning up spills.
    Seriously, I'm doing pretty good, though.

    Thanks for the cute entry


    Dee


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    November 10, 2007

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    short but cute...

    poor Yem...are you picking on him again...this is a really cute piece you wrote..it would make a good "add on" round robin poem...Good luck with the catz meow


  • Yemassee gold member
    November 10, 2007
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    And since that background isn't a cat, you must mean thatr it's Dee!

    The Catz Trilogy (had to use it.) When I was a kid, we made the mistake of leaving a cooked turkey on the sideboard. We came back and the cat was feasting.

    skinny lady
    and fat cat
    evil author

    Sorry. Short and sweet, like you..no wait, you're bittersweet.


    • gaze
      November 10, 2007
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      am I? ok you asked for that, here it comes

      man from Maine
      pets a skinny cat
      no snack left


      • Yemassee gold member
        November 10, 2007

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        I had a there but doesn't show. Ah you're getting mean.

        People will feel bad for me.

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