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This one morning

I feel one bundle of atoms
writhing in the morning under my palm,
a flicker of tree limb shadows
by the light of Janus
tickles my face and leaves me unenthused
like your perfect, perfect eyes
taken off to steal mine away
until you come
back to bed.

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