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Waiting in the Rain

Where rains drizzled upon my lips,
left in hopeless need;
the cool rivulets caressing
an aching soul.

Shrouded in misted clouds,
lost for but a moment
in desired reality,
with arched back, begging.

How I could taste you
in each delicate drop,
dancing amongst my tastebuds,
burning your essence into my core.
Your being singed upon
the intricacies of my mind.

With open arms-
wanting...
needing...
I grasp the phantasmic image
only to dive deeper into dreams.

One day,
manifested before me
will be the reality I seek
where desires become tangible.
But tonight,
I will be soothed by the
fresh rain that falls
under the moon...

and wait.

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    Oh my goodness, this hit me straight in the heart. Wow you can express what I am feeling so well. Get outta my head!!! Awesome writing as usual! You haven't missed a beat.

    Jeannie


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      November 10, 2007
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      Told you I had some thoughts running through the brain while stuck away in no-man's land!
      So much I want...no need to express right now.

      Thanks for the comments hun, appreciate it.

      Storm