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Crazziladi

Who am I? is the question before
I am the mom typical to see
I am the one who needs to let her spirit soar
I am the one who rarely lets free

Reliable and dependable always on time
the one who is always in control
sometimes I think should be a crime
my name here is actually my goal

I need a place mind to set free
a place to go so I don't go crazy
a place for my release can you see
a place to stop and pick up that daisy

my name is my inner soul on release
sometimes five minutes to keep me sane
and find some inner peace
a name where I can go and play in the rain

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  • Tylers Baby
    November 10, 2007

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    This is really nice, and thanks a lot 4 all the comments. I have always admired adults who can be so poetic. Often I think adults try to hide their feelings. Not you though, great job!

  • Stormraven
    November 10, 2007
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    Oooo I like , storm