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Heartache and Betrayal

You said all the right things to win my heart.
You promised we'd be together forever.
Why didn't i see that forever only meant today?
I was in love.
I loved someone who just thought it was just a game.
You toyed with my emotions,
whispered sweet little lies,
crushed my spirit,
and ripped my heart into a million pieces.
Could things get any worse,

when you told me you found someone else?
The girl of your dreams wasn't me anymore.
I thought this heartache couldn't get any more painful
I was mistaken.
His new lover was my own sister!
The deception and Betrayal!!!

I'll never fall for another player!

 

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  • maskedwarrior198
    December 6, 2007

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    intriguing

    I think you speak for everyone who has loved and has been cheated on or broken up with. You can almost feel the pain as it pours through the words that you have written. Its a great write with a good twist at the ending.