So much to say of many things I regret,
things have happened I'll never forget.
Beauty of the souls collided and lost
passion, love, and dreams; lost, the cost.
An Angelic soul lost from all true hope;
blessed with an ardent will to cope.
If I could turn back the hands of time,
nary a sound nor word would ever chime.
I wouldn't be lost in eternal tears of love
giving away infinite dreams to heaven above,
instead.... I'm too lost to forget
[m2lost24get]
Author notes
PROMPT: who I am
A contest entry
- Write a Namesake Poem by Stormraven.
1500 points, ended November 27, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your beautiful words flow so softly and touch my heart so deep...I do wish you much happiness
...Thank you so much for sharing you with me...I'm very pleased to meet you
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This really had fantastic meter and rhyme .
I loved this line ...
If I could turn back the hands of time,
nary a sound nor word would I ever chime.
I have felt that way more then once and your poem is a good reminder for me and anyone who reads it . Nope sometimes you can't take back the things you have said and done } but you sure can learn from them eh , Great Write , Storm -
This is a real description of the person behind nice job!!!good luck
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Touching, sorrowful write. So sorry for your loss. Hope you will find strength and peace
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Oh this is really good I saw some changes I would probably make in sentence structure but other then that i would not change a thing and it won't affect my judging , storm
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