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Orphus

My history starts in the straits of Messina,
a land of enchantment and fantasy.
Originally people said I was half bird and half woman,
but my beauty and powers posse the.
A temptress by day,
and a seductress by night.
My enticing songs,
lured the mates to my site.
The captain would put wax in their ears,
to keep them from hearing my beautiful leers.
My enticing voice echoing off the shore,
had men a running to have me adore.
The first mate escaped the captains grasp,
he climbed up the boulders in my arms at last.
My fingers moved slowly, his buttons undone,
I nibbled his nipples as my hands began to roam.
Kissing him passionately ,my mystical touch,
we bathed in the ocean where his manhood would thrust.
My lips took his manhood and swallowed it all,
his body was shaking on fire for my wall.
My song had ended, the silence was  real,
the first mate had vanished, my song had revealed.

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  • Angelic Princess21
    December 14, 2007

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    oooooo you got a pretty silver trophy on this one and i see why too its a very good write.
    thanks for sharing this


  • Jarrod
    November 12, 2007

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    ummm I am reading here a poem about the important of chastity and the value it holds. The man gets want he wants and vanishes. It was important to the woman but just another for the man? The song ends quick just like virginity did. Maybe I am reading it wrong.


  • Blueskywonder
    November 10, 2007

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    WOW! Very enchanting... magical fueled by excitement.

    An erotic piece seducing the senses!



  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 10, 2007
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    Nice write good luck in the contest

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