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The Border Gaurdian

Caught between the four worlds I've created,
Written into existence,
Onore, Dretis, Home World, Monairique,
All unique and amazing,
But all so different.
Base aspects of who I am-
I'm trapped in the nether of them,
On the border,
Gaurding what goes on within.

I am the gaurd of the line,
I have the identity of each creature in each world,
Too many names to have my own,
Too many histories to know which is mine-
I am the Border Gaurdian.

Author notes

Kind of sloppy, but fun to write.

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  • crazziladi
    November 10, 2007
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    interesting name and poem! good luck


  • Mirthryl
    November 10, 2007

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    You are quite creative, to have designed, peopled and creature four worlds! I like your chosen name, and stance of guarding your worlds

  • Stormraven
    November 10, 2007
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    This is really interesting , thank you for entering my contest , storm


  • Rele anmwe
    November 10, 2007

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    I love this, it trully expresses who you are and how you reflect the world. I wish you the best of luck, keep up the great work