I almost ran way
I stopped myself today
I got my gear and packed
Thought I would never come back
And then I cleared my mind
My old thoughts left behind
I walked slowly away
Long before the day
I went across the road
A place I now called "home"
I was sure I'd done it right
Then my anger turned to fright
I walked around the block
In my mind, the thoughts, they fought
"It's all in the past
The sadness will not last."
I persuaded myself to come back
And on my bed I took a nap
And I dreamed about what would happen, then,
If I didn't come back in the end.
It was not a very good dream,
Oh yes, you can believe me.
I'd never thought about that again
Since I dreamed the end.
Author notes
NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE NOT TRUE
ok, sorry about the capitals lol,
I just want everyone who read this to know that it is NOT TRUE. lol. I just got inspiration and I chose to write.
NOT TRUE
Please tell me what you think
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I though I was great! My favorite part was when you wrote: "I'd never thought about the again Since I dreamed the end" That was my favorite part. I like how you can actually feel the emotional responce and you can picture it in your mind like it's actually happening! I also like the ryming and how you put it in six stanzas. Although Packed and back don't ryhme. But good job
Lzzeys
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Even if it was true it would be inspiring to me also. The rhyming is a bit cliche and the NOT TRUE was basically not need so many times but overall great piece of words.
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i think the rhyme sounds a bit forced or cliche maaybe but its still a lovely poem! but im jw why the empshasIS on the not true?
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this is really good. I like how you wrote it like you did (or were going to do it.) it's really good. keep up your awesome work!
Crimson
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