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sensations

reverberate with joy

clash in new time

musical notes slide through

drums resound

sensations quicken

the band passes

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  • rustynite silver member
    November 10, 2007
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    There is always life after the parade. Nicely written. Very well done. We would do well to listen to
    lifes rhythms and music. The band may pass. Do you
    not here the echo of the drums. There is always
    another parade. Sorry. Seems when i really read a poem i like to tell the author why. smile.