Transcendental skeletons,
frantically chasing children,
cross November's street,
without looking,
seasonal salutation's
frosty,
impaling
touch
of windy steel.
A contest entry
- One Day Quickie by Jfd.
400 points, ended November 10, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
Congrats!
A fabtastic piece, full of wonderful imagery. Congrats on the silver
-
Wow. You did an excellent job on this poem. I loved the exquisite imagery you portrayed. November is my favorite month of the year, and you did it supreme justice...
Congratulations on your trophy.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
-
I am a November born child, and am inclined to show favor to anything with a title such as this. In spite of that, you know I love the imagery you always share with the reader, and this poem is one of those.
Love the "windy steel". Exquisite! I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
-
great imagery in this....I love the pic you put with it, adds to the overall feel of the piece....this is very well done....thanks for entering!
-
Winter is almost there and the last leaves are running down the streets... so much said in these few words!
~ Nicolette
-
a lot of ideas and imagery here for 18 words, or even twice that number...remarkable...PK
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
