She spreads her wings,
You'd think it's right.
Morning comes and she's bright,
Pouring love and peace throughout.
Honey colored hair and a bright mind.
On this morning of guilt,
Nothing will stop her when it starts,
It is she that makes you feel innocent.
Everyone give her an applaud.
Author notes
I promised my friend on here, Symphonie, that I would write her a poem. I hope that this is good enough for her. I'm sure it is, but maybe it will be even better, though.
Just honest opinions, yeah? Uh-huh!
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To the point and breathtaking. Symphonie is lucky! How're you doing Nathaniel, we haven't talked in forever. Just wishing you good luck on more of your awesome writing as well as a kick ass Christmas! Hope to talk to ya soon!
~Hannah
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AWW
This was really good! Great flow and description! Jane
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Interesting acrostic. How come you never write me a poem? Just kidding. This was really good. Great, really. Keep up the good work.
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Hey! This is really cool. The only thing I would do is change "applaud" to "applause." Great write and keep it up!
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I feel so giddy inside. It's like... totally awesome to see that you wrote me a piece. A lot of what you said is like... so true about me. Thanks a million, Nathaniel. You are the most coolest guy!
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