Italic
Rose Petals So Soft
By: Julia L. Clark
Warm oils
Deep sensual breath
Closed eyes
Lips play a love melody as
Words speak in such intoxication
Touches feel like feathers as
Breath feels like warm thunder winds
Forbidden mind games
Smell like turquoise Italic rose petals
The arms of piano
Arouses my inferno
The way he massage me
And flips my channel
It’s just his waves
How he controls our shore
Sheets cry in rescue as they film essence
His sensuality lesson
Is bassinets in angels heaven
The levies of true love has been broken free
As italic rose petals must have spoken in scents of loving me.
© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved
Author notes
Italic Petals So Soft
In a list
A contest entry
- SEX! Quote prompt Week-end Quickie by butterflywriter.
650 points, ended December 3, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Petals So Soft
Comments
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This was very very good indeed. The imagery here really stands out. Very classy piece of writing and I can see why this has won a glittering trophy. Wonderful piece of work. The background too is superb. Well done Julia.
Darkest
Love to you
Wayne Leon
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Mmmm!
Fuck me!!! Damn that felt so good baby.
I was so wrapped up in this rhapsody of passion
that my penis started to pulsate.
I absolutely love this piece because its
very romantic and mystical.
A most enchanting poem written with
eloquence and grace! You go baby girl!
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Congrates On Silver,
How I love to play while I sway, to the beating of your heart so pure.. I would love this dance of sweet romance, and become a heartbeat of two that lure. Weave your mystery within poetry, and I will be inspired as well. Lyrical flows, I know so well, I could cast a symphonies spell. Strum my heartstrings tender true, and when it comes to reading me, you shall see the me straight through, the stain glass windows of harmony. Thanks for the inspiration, much love, light, and laughter~
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thanks love this is one of my favs beside my wild side lmao thanks you saw my soul reading this
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So musical and refreshing...
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thanks artist
take care when i get a chance i will
check you out
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wonderful use of metaphor! I love the last line, the way this piece concludes... I cannot imagine a more perfect ending...
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thanks hon this was a strange write believe it are not but thanks for liking it
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Beautiful, soft and sensual *sigh*
A beautiful feel to it.
Love ~sugar~ xxx
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thanks a trophy alone just impressed me honestly
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I love the description of "italic rose petals"
I also really like:
"sheets cry in rescue"
gentle and beautiful...
. Rewarded 4
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thanks honey i love you
Jewels
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auntie its fabolous i think no one on earth would have pulled off such a write you did awesome miss you cant wait until you return hope you have something for me
your niece for ever
rose
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Congratulation On the Bronze
A Awesome write Sis I have missed reading your fantastic piece. You have not loss your touch my wonderful little siste. Much love LISA
"Forbidden mind games
Smell like turquoise Italic rose petals
The arms of piano
Arouses my inferno"
. Rewarded 4
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love u barbie
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Like honey on candle wax.. Beautiful metallic colors flashed before my eyes, and I loved every second.
Suki Suki now! lol..
. Rewarded 4
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lol thanks honey i love u
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LOVE THIS
it's so smooth and soothing a really beautiful writ my sweet
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i love u sarah
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Magnificent write of erotic sensuality...you won bronze but this should be Gold!...This an alluring read, that rocks the whole concept......loving it!...novy
. Rewarded 4
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love u Mrs E take care
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wow mommy you won bronze this was worth more but its scented so different fab job
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great imagery
Smell like turquoise Italic rose petals, love this line
thanks for entering, good luck in the contest.
. Rewarded 4
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thanks good luck judging
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Another beautiful and sensual write.
Well done and all the best to you
in this contest my friend. Good
luck!
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thanks honey for your loyal support i love you jeremy
jewels
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A new favorite......
this was soft and sensual, only thing left to say is Perfect
Piff
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