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Six of Hearts

1. Where she keeps the key to her own heart,
who to open the door for

2. When she’s had enough…back up, re-group, and then conquer

3. How to celebrate her gifts and share them

4. Admit her weaknesses

5. Forgive her enemies

6. Forgive herself

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Every Woman Should Know...

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  • Bob Fox
    November 17, 2007

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    Different

    But I love the presentation. And a honest heart is a thing of beauty. & also thank you for your kind comment on my poem


  • Ladybug
    November 11, 2007

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    good analogy of a woman in love with life itself.

    congrats on the gold
    keep dreaming and let the pen run dry.

    Tamara


  • Swan song gold member
    November 10, 2007
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    Awesome this was very different and very very good I liked it Congrats on the gold well deserved


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    Perfectly stated! What everyone should know and more. Very much the idea of the contest, women and the freedom they have to be and do whatever they want. Not how to be a mother, a wife, a lover...those things we are born with. Everyone should know how to know what is right and when to make the choice herself.
    Nicely done.

    Thank you for entering!

    • butterflywriter
      November 10, 2007
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      OMG, Thanks for the GOLD...

      they were all lessons learned the hard way and things I want to pass on to my granddaughters. Again, thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it.

  • ecrivain01
    November 10, 2007
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    Intriguing idea ...

    although I'd call it a list instead of a poem. However, it works on its own level.

    • butterflywriter
      November 10, 2007
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      well, I added the numbers after the title

      because...I hadn't put the prompt in the title, which would have made it more clear as a poem and less like a list. Now, that should be clear as mud. Happy Saturday. P.

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