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Mirror Poems: Myra & Ron

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WORLD  WEARY  (Sijo) 

(i) Myra 

Moon turned a blind eye to sorrow. Stars speak of none but shimmers.
Sun scorched in daily dying; offers to its eternal Source.
Words have become too heavy to word Light. Lovers are silent.

(ii) Ron 

Lillypilly leaves droop at noon; delicate, pink-tipped, silent.

Wind back the clock’s hour hand to dawn. Dew on wild tulips glistens.

Images, with words, fade at night. One more day nearer to God.   

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Copyright.  Nov. 10th 2007.  Myra & Ron 

Of interest …    http://http://www.ahapoetry.com/SIJO.HTM

Author notes

This is, as always, a surprise for Myra. One day, I shall not live up to her standards. I hope that this is not that day! Ron.

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  • MargaretG
    November 10, 2007

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    Myra's poem brought old emotions in its images.

    Your non-sequential thoughts tease me; somehow noon, morning and night become an eternal now - one day closer to God. I like the floral imagery, always a consolation. Lillypilly is new to me, it sounds like a child's name for whatever it is, sweet. I can't comment on sijo form.


  • myrataal silver member
    November 10, 2007
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    I love it. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

    You are special and you ALWAYS catch me by surprise! What a gentle picture you sketched here and how POSITIVE a perspective. Purely divine.

    Bravo, Poet.

    • Lyndon gold member
      November 10, 2007
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      And now, I am delighted

      and NOT diluted nor deluded!!!!
      Thank you, dear Myra, thank you!

  • Lyndon gold member
    November 10, 2007
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    Incomplete as yet!

    Some strange cyberspace kind of horse flu.

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