It's getting dark, and the wind's howling,
I swear I hear some wolves growling.
No star light's the sky,
I think I'm stuck and I don't know why.
Lost, and I can't find my way,
This was supposed to be a fun day.
A quick walk was what they said,
At this rate, tomorrow I'll wake up dead!
Oh my God, what was that sound.
Something's seen me, I daren't look round.
I just don't recognise my surroundings,
This place is so large and confounding.
Is that light up ahead, or am I dreaming?
Yikes, that noise is defintely screaming.
I'm just going to run away,
Goodness knows how many hours 'til day.
Wait, there's definitely a light,
Hopefully I can make it without a fight.
Oh no, I hear voices, someone shouting me,
I need to hide, I'll find a big tree.
Flood lights suddenly light all around me,
Immeadiatly, everything I can see.
'Oi, love, what you doin' 'ere?'
'I'm lost forever, or so I fear'
'What you talkin' 'bout, you ain't lost'
Came his reply, cold as frost.
'Stupid girl, this is floor E3,
You parked your car on floor B3!'
A contest entry
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lol i love it!
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i love it at first you think its a fairy tale in the woods but then it turns to be a building great thats like an awesome idea
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thanks for the comment!
I'm glad the twist works, i wasn't sure if I had pulled it off or not!!
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Brilliant! I did at first think she was lost on the moors and the search party had found her, never thought for one minute of a multi story car park! Fantastic punch line. Best of luck in the contest with it
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Great Punchline
I like the whole tragic lost and the great punchline stupified me. Well done and good luck.
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Lmfao This was so dam funny god at the start i thought this was going to be one of those tragic storys a person lost in the bushes never to be found but the end oh my god i am still laughing. Brilliant write my friend.
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