Searching for some company
On a long and withered road
Someone who will sing me
The rhythm of their soul
Running towards tomorrow
As fast as his legs can go
Nathaniel comes to save me,
Gentile, generous, he's aglow -
Exposing his heart of gold
Author notes
I like... promised I'd write him something, and so... here it is.
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oh wow. dats cute, loved it... nice write! ... oh and from ur pic, i think u look like avril lavigne too ... nyway back to the poem... its got a nice flow. short and sweet...
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awww
thats kinda cute...
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Wonderful
A great creation for an acrostic. Wonderful images you have crafted and thoughts too.
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And a most endearing write it is, well done. By the way, I happen to enjoy acrostics; I find them to quite clever.
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Hmm...this was really good. It kind of describes me, as well. I'll be posting my poem for you as soon as I can, Jennifer. It should make you proud.
I enjoyed the flow, wording, meaning and the acrostic of this. Keep up the great work, Jennifer. I look forward to many more pieces of poetry from you. -
They keep sending this one back to me
Later i will go through your poems and really comment
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very sweet and so well crafted...perfect flow!
Blessings~
Az
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Exposing his heart of gold
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This is so beautiful and graceful
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