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Thoughts Of You

I know forever
you capture my mind
My core and very breath of existence
with thoughts of you

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    Ah..a complete surrender of the heart and the identity ..love is in the essence of the words..a beautiful piece you have made here a realtiy of the life..well done..