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Fatality's Is Just An Apparel








  Nostalgic dreams,
  staining pallid lips
  of cleansed sinners,

  uttered apologies
  drowned in narcism,

  bottled lust,
  engrossed in

      -- toxications









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  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 11, 2007
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    Congrats!

    Great write, congrats on the gold


  • Jfd
    November 10, 2007

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    this is great... you've said so much in so little...my only question is "narcism" supposed to be narcissism?