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A special day

now that I have made it through
I see what was to be
I loved & lost some precious things
but never was it me

these petty, subtle, feelings
keep me on my feet
but I have never lost my way
no matter where I've been

months have silently crept passed me
and I won't give up
I'll hold onto this delicate thought
until the day we touch

though this poem may be meaningless now
one day it'll be of use
for I can feel your presence nearing me
and this will be my proof


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I. Have. No. Idea.

just close your eyes and dream.

is it alright?

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  • singingfreedom
    November 10, 2007

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    I liked the last stanza of the piece, especially the lines, "though this poem may be meaningless now/one day it'll be of use". Those are amazing lines.


    • Ebyru
      November 18, 2007
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      thank you. =)

      I truly believe in real love and waiting for the right person, so this was something I had to share.

      thanks for your kind words. <3

  • Nads.H
    November 10, 2007
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    I love it!! Really really good