She now holds what once beat in my chest...
Took my heart and left the rest.
But through all the turmoil and all the pain,
I only hope for her gain.
Now I find myself attatched,
Strange new feelings have come forth and hatched.
I think this feeling goes beyond the surface,
Becaus all I can think about is her face.
She helps me see through the haze,
But whenever I see her i'm in a daze.
This feeling has got to be more than love...
Like a powerful force raining from up above.
I don't know why i feel this way,
After the destructive force she sent through me.
I know I still lover and I always will...
Like my world never moves, but I like where I'm standig, even if it's still.
I'll do everything to make sure she does'nt suffer...
And don't worry bout me...every battle only makes me tougher.
Though I wonder how life could've been,
If only I hadn't...lost in the end.
A contest entry
- Pain or Love by XxESPNCHICKxX.
600 points, ended January 13, 2008, 82 entries
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another great poem from you! i loved the rhyme! i see you are one of the few people who can do it well! Good luck in the contest!!!
~NineTailedFox
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Good poem, a few spelling errors but overall a great read. You have done great with the rhyming scheme, it flows well. All the best with it in the contest
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Really good I love how you pour your emotions out into your poems...
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well that explains why you didnt rag on when its time. by the way. what the hell is "chesy???" awesdome wrtie though. nice flow. would say it cam from the heart but apperently you dot have youres a t the moment . aight keep pennin. peace.
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very nice poem
you r sincere n true
may u never be blue
find another love
whose ever true
god bless u
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