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Life's Mountain

We climb our way up to the top
Step by step we go
Don't look down
We can't retreat
Up is the only way to go
Look ahead bright skies are there
Don't get discouraged,or give up and quit
We must over come this mountain
Once at the top you will see
just how much you can do
So don't let anyone stop you
From being all that you can be

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  • Lyndon gold member
    November 25, 2007
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    Thank you for your 12 lines

    poet.
    You have written a poem of encouragement, allegorically, applying to any task in life or of life itself.
    Thank you poet for this. And the poem is a shape poem in that it resembles the monument in the foreground.
    "overcome".
    Lyndon of the Winklings.