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Where Everyone Steps

i checked the spelling
with rich editing skills
that over analyzes my thoughts
of the society that
i collapse under

enclosed
between the floorboard cracks
my solitary confinement

where everyone steps

 

this isolation

keeps me up at night

this reality

omits me from inspiration

 

knowledge ranks us

and i ponder the importance

while i stack the notes high

i don't give a damn

 

still cold benieth my covers

while i'm missing it all

Author notes

This isn't edited really. I just wanted to write it. I might change a few things later.

I've been thinking a lot about this. Whatever you take "this" as.

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