the taste
of blood
as I bite my lip
true words
no longer spoken
as per your request
In a list
A contest entry
- One Day Quickie by Jfd.
400 points, ended November 10, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Review Requested
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made me think of the idea of "biting your tongue" to spare someones feelings or out of respect for someone else....thanks for entering
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Jfd
Thank you for your comments and thank you for hosting this contest.
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Oh, very good-and you described it well. All the inner turmoil unspoken between the lines, an excellent write!
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Susie
Yes, you are correct. There is a much deeper meaning besides the obvious.
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