She feels alone,
Betrayed,
Broken,
In the silent filled street,
Wondering,
Which turn will be the wrong one?
A contest entry
- One Day Quickie by Jfd.
400 points, ended November 10, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow...
a great idea
short and simple...
but it leaves you thinking
brilliant!!!
seej
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interesting idea, I liked the idea of "which turn will be the wrong one"...thanks for entering
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i can really relate to this one
hits home
i love it
and really good job
so few words
yet such emotion
good job =]
Beks
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