A woman knows what she has learned.
Has she learned we are beautiful,
men reign high?
Life's not fair,
dreams can be destroyed.
Be alive,
no limit in sight?
Be strong,
never lose a fight.
what she knows, she learned.
Nichole Dustin
11/9/2007
Author notes
HOPE THIS WORKS, I took the prompt what every woman should know, and this is what became of it. Username parntsoftwins
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 enteries/40 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 10, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like this poem it shows a lot of things that women do struggle with. good job!
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Sweetheart,this is a silver I agree...Learning yes learning what we have and still being positive, and saying we are beautiful. It has taught me compassion...and had me meeting others in a research group in Maryland, (Bethesda)..Wonderful woman of courage getting lung transplants, kidney transplants...I am sure you can tell me a story! Beautiful words!
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Thank you so very much for such heartfelt comments, and beautiful words of encouragement.
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Well done on the win... Be alive,
no limit in sight?... That is right ... We have no limits .. Keep up the good work
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I like this one
Its simplicity allows the true meaning to stand out. Being a women is hard enough w/ out all the other issues women like I deal w/ everyday. You are doing awesome, keep um commin!
Luvs,
Melanie
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I really like this. Short but sends a clear message.
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yes this was beautiful congrats on the win
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Thank you very much!!!
It's my first trophy besides HM I am happy
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Well done! Yes every woman should know all this and more. You wrote it so well with truth and beauty.
"Be strong,
never lose a fight."
my favorite part of this write. Though sometimes we need to know how to walk away.
Excellent work.
Thank you for entering!
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