Lovers unite.
Two become one.
Dancing shadows cast upon moonlit walls.
Where I end and he begins is a mystery
That only the night can solve.
His gentle caress sends chills up and down my spine.
With each kiss on my lips, my body yearns for him.
With each whisper in my ear, I ache.
With each warm breath upon my neck, I want him more.
He teases me, the way only he knows how,
Bringing me so close to eruptive pleasure
That I plead for him to stop.
But he doesn't.
It's a game to him, watching me squirm.
I'm a captive in his seductive prison.
But I want control.
In a sudden move I take over,
Clutching his penis firmly in my hand.
Massaging it, I move down from his lips,
To his chin,
His chest...
I pause...
The longing in his eyes, the desire in his heart, I see it all.
It makes me want him even more.
I continue down from his chest to his erected member.
Grabbing it tightly, I lower my mouth and take him entirely.
He moans, then squirms, then moans again...
It turns me on to see him this way.
I run my free hand down my stomach and then further still.
With one hand pleasuring his penis,
I use the other to endulge myself.
He continues to moan.
I join in his song.
It feels so good...
He raises up, flipping me on my back,
Then thrusts his swollen member inside my aching pussy.
He thrusts harder...
And harder...
And harder...
His moans become louder.
Mine become screams of ecstasy.
What pleasure!
I feel his body tighten as he gets close to his release.
I plead for him to stop...
Don't stop...
Stop...
Keep going...
Harder...
Harder...
Don't stop...
Yes, Yes, Yes...
Author notes
Published this once before and got removed from a "New Write ONLY" contest accidently. Republishing so please, comment honestly. I will, however, copy/paste the comments I received on the other version on here... or at least a link between the two!
Ecstasy Verion 1
A contest entry
- Make Me Squirm (15+) by Zerstort.
390 points, ended November 10, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be brutally honest! I appreciate constructive criticism.
Comments
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oops, Sorry I must have wandered in the wrong room.
But wow! what an eyeful I got here!
You were so enthralled in it all you probably didn't even notice my presence. Let me sneak bak out before I distroy the moment!
((((((((((SMILES)))))))))))))))))))
MassMan--
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You are so funny Pops!
Sorry you had to catch us in such an... ummmm... awkward situation! Nothing like your AP dad walking in on you and your hubby! Glad you enjoyed though, Pops!
~*Rebellious AP Daughte*~
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I think this is a highly sensual erotic piece full of warming imagery... excitement racing content.
Leaves one sort of aching with desire
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Okay.....
I got it now, thanks for resubmitting..but, I think I might have did it accidentally. I took off the prewrites because I had wanted to stop letting them in, and I'm thinking that because (was it?) a prewrite..it got deleted....
I'm really thinking it is my fault, so I'm sorry anyways.
Aden Recreated
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