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You Gotta Go

You Gotta Go

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

Loving me

Loving her

Is a no go

You must get your

Shit

And split

Because when you betrayed me

You betray your damn self and it is

You who pushed my trust away

So do you feel the pains?

Do you say fuck you’s?

When I ignore you?

Am I torturing you?

Yes I am punishing you

Who the fuck do you think you are

Disobeying me

Pushing me away

If you can’t do as I say

Then you must go

There will be no more

Stroking your ego

Are let my tongue rains go

When I reach your heights of wanton inferno

Why do I make you taste your on pain?

Why I make you over drive your brain?

Why you can’t understand?

I gave you my faithful hand

you must go

So surrender back to me

My damn wedding

B

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

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  • mourningmonday
    November 26, 2007

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    Hot damn that was amazing!!! I love how you make demands of your lover and give him the ultimate choice: her, me, or get the heck out of Dodge. The anguish, anger, and dominance is definitely felt. Very nicely written!


  • Whenitefallz
    November 16, 2007

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    "wow, you know a couple of years ago....Damnit I needed this piece to hang on my rear view mirror, bathroom, in my purse, on my desk..damn I need this then." <-Piph..}

    On the nose!! Wooo - "somebody" needed to hear this
    piece like a song on the radio.. I've settled into complacency now - almost, lol. Would like this to be a final exit line, but - - DAAAMMNNN - that body of his makes me lose concentration.. and thoughts, a-and, panties - - lol! This rocked!!


  • Symphonie
    November 10, 2007

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    Hell yeah!

    Great job, girl. I mean, it's like... so true. If a man's gonna be unfaithful, there ain't no way he's gonna be staying with me much longer. Love the emotion conveyed in this piece.

    Rock on, girl!


  • Ephiphany
    November 10, 2007

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    and Good Morning to you.....

    wow, you know a couple of years ago....Damnit I needed this piece to hang on my rear view mirror, bathroom, in my purse, on my desk..damn I need this then.

    What an inspirational piece full of Raw emotion and pain for many women who have endured this in their lives. Women RULE the world, the sooner Men realize this the better, huh?

    Write on Lovie....


  • Lil Atl 30319
    November 10, 2007

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    great contest piece julia i think you doing ok to have been gone you covered and expressed a lot of things in this and you did a excellent job and i love it and you

    Mommy Lil Atl 30319


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    come here..and let me hug you honey.It will be okay fuck him, you have me and i love you.
    Well done expressing
    Best wishes in this contest
    Love
    Tory


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    Great job with this one! Very deep and sad are your words. Something that we all hope will never happen to us in our relationships. Great job and good luck to you my friend!




    Jeremy0826

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    This might be a contest piece but I think you just captured my life right here.. the other woman.. betrayal, abandonment... wonderfully penned here.. goodluck in this contest.

    Karen


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      November 9, 2007
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      thanks honey i am sort of experiencing it as well we strong so its ok thanks for commenting i appreciate that

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