Take me away my lover
to endless oceans love.
Waves of passion's fire.
Make me feel something
anything.
With tender spicy touches
that lingers tingling my senses.
Trace my lips with your fingertips,
Grace my silky body,with warm breath.
Take the flower from my hair,
petals soft pleasure,
write your needs upon my skin.
Need me
Want me
Make love to me
as only lovers can.
Author notes
Hope i done you proud!
A contest entry
- Let Me Feel Romanced by stavykm.
800 points, ended November 14, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You won silver! Thank you
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You won silver!! Thank you for entering! stavykm
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Beautiful Write
Yes I feel the romance here for sure. Oh and how you added nature into the poem to capture into the romance is brilliant. I love the ocean. The title is sweet Take The Flower From My Hair meaning petals of soft pleasure, very nice. Then the first line Take me away my lover and then the last line Make love to me as only lovers can. Excellent write, you swept me away.
Good luck in the contest. Kelle Marie, stavykm and Christina.
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sexyfull!
lol.
Great write lisa. I like how you put emotion into the ocean. its pertty.
Well i'll porbally see you h ere in a lil bit.
Love ya.
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Absoultly beautiful
wow this was such a wonderful decriprition
to a women in love needing her man
What wonderful and fulfilled words
Good luck in the contest
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A beautiful Love Story
Very good and I like it.. Always did and always will/ But remember love is only strong if you let it be strong.
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me think you have a winner here, sounds like the good times are ready to roll. quite a write here, Sis, i think you pulled out all the stops here. lol.
very nice written with caring.
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Man I wish I had a lover that would be so romantic lol... you are just the artist of love right now and it is beautiful to see such happiness.... lovely write, goodluck in your contest
Karen
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