Honesty
Never in...Reality
Always some new specialty
In telling me a lie..
My whole world
Thought we were..so secure
Thought you were my everything
Then we died...
Teardrops
So many I've lost
crying over memories gone
I'm so alone...
Love
Something that was...Never there
I think there once was a care
You were incomplete.
Author notes
I should be an expert on this subject by now ..Haha but this is something short and simple I came up with :0)
A contest entry
- A love that was never real but the pain after was by MysteriousMoonlight.
875 points, ended December 29, 2007, 58 entries
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perfectly sad
sad and sweet love poem -very beguiling
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This was very sad and sweet, hun. We've all felt this way - and I'm sure you know you'll find somebody worthy of your love in time.
And the memories, they'll never be gone. I try to never let the bad things that happen afterwards taint how I remember the good things.
As they say, and I know it's a cliche, "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened" -
Oh. This is some poem that you have here. It is very sad. But I guess it is always sad when love falls apart or when it feels like it was never real. We all go through this kind of thing but it doesn't seem to make it any easier for us, does it? I guess that's just part of life. I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself.
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This has sadness and has emotion in it!Good luck in the contest!
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It sounds like the other person isn't the only one incomplete. I feel a sadness and emptiness radiating in this poem. It is very sad, but very well written.
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nice poem
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I am sorry I didnt get your message in time to move my poem! But I just did. I cant get on here too often so I am really really sorry about that!
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Removing to close this contest. please enter in other contest
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I'm sorry but could you please re enter this poem in a new contest i am holding because of some error made this contest will be shut down a new one will be started same type so don't change the poem please!
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I love the lasst stanza in the begining of it and the end of it.Good luck in the contest!
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