~after dawn's sweet kiss~
wild ponies of Chincoteague,
~run free in the Blue~
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dedicated to Blue, for her love of VA eastern shore and all things Natures' bounty.
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Nice--ever since reading MISTY OF CHINCOTEAGUE in about fifth grade, the word has held an exotic fascination for me. And this piece captures that essence in three short lines. Even without the colors (ingenious touch), the words work a marvel.
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Very beautiful....amazing photo...Im sure my dear sister loves this...breathtaking..
You have a wonderful eye for beautiful things..
Peace
~A~
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Beautiful write. Beautiful imagery in this piece. Nice haiku form. I liked how you used different colors in the text, the different colors seemed to symbolize a sunset and the blue seemed to symbolize the sky. Keep up the great work.
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This is such a sweet gift...
One I will keep close. Thank-you
for the sentiment and the beautiful
scenery these lines set free; but most
of all thank-you for capturing some of
my true spirit in one of my most favorite
forms of poetry. Big hugs, Blue
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Aww this is such a sweet haiku, I don't think you could be mean Lenny.
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Nice
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