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misty mornings

as
sun
burns
off the
fresh dew
the trails
of ascending
mist rise
and i go
along
too

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  • freespirit51
    November 17, 2007

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    really cute form and style here master poet. I really enjoyed it. The slight rhyme was just enough for the short piece. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.


  • Androgyneric
    November 14, 2007

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    Oooh, it rhymes! Short, sweet, and to the point! I love it! For some reason, it really sticks to me!