Cut the chains
that imprint
upon my soul.
Bleeding
under asphixiation's
possession,
these stains
will rendezvous
in Hades.
Author notes
18 words only
A contest entry
- One Day Quickie by Jfd.
400 points, ended November 10, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congrats!
Just stopped by to say congrats on the bronze, very well earned
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Intense, amazing to pack such power in 18 words. Best of luck in the contest!
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wow this is a strong piece gran which just speaks so much within it and is strongly penned
wel done and best of luck
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This said so much with so few words, great poem. Best of luck to you!
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Love this! What emotions are penned here! Just 18 words...amazing! I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Your ability to change moods and styles of writing always amazes me. I never know what will be waiting when I click on your poems. Best of luck in the contest Mum
Margaret
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Like I said, Gaylene, I really do enjoy reading your darker, more twisted side... This is brilliant, especially the last lines! They really do pack an emotional punch! Extremely well done, and best of luck to you in the contest
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I feel a little like this at the moment
You have done this well and so fast... I don't know how you do it gold or peanuts
Karen
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lot to say in a few words and in a limited time too. good job.
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