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Parched

Breathing you in,
it is only you that can quench
the parched aching of my lips -

with your tender kiss.

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  • pearl-dragon gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    Congratulations on the Gold Storm. You haven't lost that wonderful touch while you were away.

    Margaret


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    Oh, I like this one very much.

    For it touches the soul
    just for a single kiss.

    Riftkin

  • crimsondew silver member
    November 9, 2007
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    Very sensual and beautiful..All the best!

  • Virgoan
    November 9, 2007

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    I like this one. Effective message to the readers. Well done fellow poet.

    Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in this contest.

    VIRGOAN

  • Michael A
    November 9, 2007

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    so soft and lovely, really an exceptional write in few words. thank you for sharing, nice to see you back too

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