In my silence, I hear your whisper;
soft and sweet, still yet urgent.
In my self given aloneness,
I have shifted into another space
where time has no end and life begins.
My questions seek more than answers,
they are like freckles upon skin,
deeply rooted and in a forever way,
caught within light and yielding
my submission to the only true One.
(C) Debby Sorensen Carlson
November 09, 2007
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Hoodwinked!
That quiet time of prayer and reflection does open our eyes to that spiritual plane of eternity where true love and purpose are found and a profound sense of belonging. This poem spoke to my heart, thanks for sharing.
You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!
Dennis
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Dennis
Thank you. Your words are a blessing to me. may you always be in His grace and peace.
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If only I could shift into that kind of space(sighs)
Wonderful and spiritual piece.
Thanks for sharing
Erik
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Erik
Thank you. God bless..d
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Another great poem this one shows me you have true love for god.. With the line Caught within light and yeilding my submission to the only true one. Great job
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Word Poet
Again, thank you ! I do love God with all my heart. Blessings. d
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This was full of such meaning.
I got a sense of peace reading it [It may be weird, but oh well.]
Great job
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AnotherFace
Thank you !! It is meant to leave peace..
Blessings. Debby
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nice comparrison about the freckles,your talent shows greatly.
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Tya Bones.. much appreciated. God bless. Debby
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very good
i like it
so much meaning
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i gather the intensity of solitude
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fraankie
Thank you very much !! Blessings. Debby
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I have always for some reason felt so comforted when I read your writes.. I think it must be your devotion to our father and he blesses you with such an awesome talent. both as a writer and a person!
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angel
THank you so much for your sweet comments. God bless, Debby
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Hiya Sis
It is always so good to read your work. This is a wonderful piece - full of deep feelings and questions.
I pray all is well with you.
Love and hugs - joanne
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Jo
Thankya Jo.. keep us in your prayers. I am doing better but it has been a rough time for my family. Much love, Debby
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this suggests spiritual beckoning with "the only true One" as the almighty...nice write..
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Puzzledone
Thank you so much.. blessings , Debby
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I loved like freckles...deeply rooted. That was a great image. This was really nice, really makes you think.
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Mandi
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Blessings. Debby
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