Our life pebbles are
someone else’s stepping stones.
Walk them with power.
Expectations high
Accomplish, achieve
Embracing promises.
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18 words...whatever
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A contest entry
- One Day Quickie by Jfd.
400 points, ended November 10, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very thought provoking double Haiku---A lot of profound observations in a minimum of words--Well Penned!
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a great double haiku that you have here
i think the first one is the one i like the most. very powerful words and thought-provoking
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Not bad here a nice philosophic view Well done
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"Walk them with Power" so very strong and definite.
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No matter what, we should all take this poem to heart, and keep pressing forward. These words of wisdom, and foresight strike fast in my heart. Excellent! I wish you the best in the challenge dear sister.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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this is beautifully written with truth within your words mum
i loved the way you wrote this
well done and best of luck
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Very well done, always stride forward and reach for your goals with purpose. An excellent write baby..Love you...Scott
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