Specializing
in knowledge
and within the
Fields of motherhood,
a woman should know,
the ways of healing boo boos
to healing a daughter’s broken heart.
Paths known for all to travel,
from family to friends;
Life cycles,
changes.
Women
RULE.
Author notes
40 words
Prompt: A woman should know...
LUB!
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 enteries/40 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 10, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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this was sweet and true good work
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How wonderfully true. Beauty in your words of motherhood...yet I would like for you to step outside of the box of what every womane should by social standards and find the freedom of womanhood.
Well done and very touching as a mother.
Thank you for entering! -
this is a beautiful and wonderfully written piece mum which holds alot within the words you have penned. well done and best of luck


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Very nicely done, although I'm not quite sure of the point you're trying to make here. Remember, I'm a man, I don't get hints.
Love you...Scott







