What a woman should know,
am I suppose to tell you?
A woman knows what she is taught,
a woman knows what she has learned.
Has she learned we are all beautiful,
deep down in our soul?
Has she learned that men reign high,
high on the todem pole?
Has she learned that life's not fair,
no matter how much she dreams?
Has she learned that when she dreams,
it can be ripped apart at the seams?
Has she learned to be alive,
No limits in sight.
Has she learned to be strong
never lose a fight?
You ask me what a woman should know,
As though there is a book.
I feel every woman knows,
from life what she took.
Nichole Dustin
11/9/2007
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OPTION 7..
Prompt "what every woman should know"
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Quite an interesting poem that you've written here actually... the flow is a tad bit wobbly here and there, but nothing to worry about. Rhyme isn't consistent though, and sometimes feels a bit forced...
Anyway, thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
great job! this is really good. best of luck on this contest!
~rocklover91 -
good write
As a women I have learned to absorb everything in and appreciate the smallest things. I enjoy being a women, I think we are much smarter than most men if you ask me!LOL! But seriously, I wouldn't want to be anyone else, even after all life has taught me. It's okay to be wrong. I just wish it wouldn't happen so damn often! LOL!
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You ask me what a woman should know,
As though there is a book.
I feel every woman knows,
from life what she took... This says it all... There is no book... very nice.. Very well written ..
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This is such a great write! Love it. Thank you for entering and good luck!!
Leslie -
wow this is great!!! I loved every line..and thanks for the comment!!
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Lovely write of truth and deeply emotional.
Saying so much in your words.
Thank you for sharing your beauty, but the rule is 40 words or less.
Love
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