pass her by.

glance to glance

you'll find no word of
C O M F O R T
to secure your place
in her mind

she wont give you
the signal your waiting for

dont hold steady for the
U N S T A B L E
it will only waste your time

you are broken by her
IMPERFECTIONS
your perceptions are wrong

you may find your place
in ten-thousand hearts
they are yours to
pick & choose

but you confine your mind
to the
T A K E N

together
you set yourselves up for
F A I L U R E

she'll watch
Y O U
pass
H E R
by

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Written October 18th, 2003

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poisonsilver
October 29, 2003
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY awesome poem! I can't express how much i think this poem meens! you have written at least two meenings into it! great job! awesoem! I really like the way you formed your stanzas! NICE WORK! keep writing!
xforeverydeath
October 20, 2003
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it was not directed towards you. i'll never something like that towards you.
zaotik
October 20, 2003
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because
A word on desiring the unobtainable. You know, of course, that you (or he) always wants what they can't have. It's the way things work. Find the flaws in what you have, and find the glory in the things you cannot. I for one, make my bed of unrest... by perpetuating the same process mentioned above.

As for the poem: It speaks for itself. Loudly. -Adrian
xforeverydeath
October 19, 2003
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yo.
Hmm. I like the message Kala. You write so, hardcore. haha.

"together
you set yourselves up for
F A I L U R E
she'll watch
Y O U
pass
H E R
by"

i like.
Edited on Oct 20, 9:33 because ''.