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My life withers away.

My life, it should never have been

Yet that one day God decided to save me

Why I ask keep me in this world?

This world I despise so much

Full of hate and evil at every turn

I condemn my very existence

I just want to be free

Yet I still have one question in my mind

Was I saved for a reason?

Do I have a purpose in this life?

Or am I destined to walk the path of torment?

These question no one can seem to answer

And God ignores my every prayer

For I must be cursed to walk this lonely road

A road that never ends

God has abandoned me here 

On a world that doesn't care

So a wither away day by day

Hoping this hell ends soon

My soul in purgatory burning bright

Will I ever see heavens marvelous light? 

Or is this life my lonesome fate? 

 

 

 

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  • sweet nightmares
    November 16, 2007

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    i think that everything happens 4 a reason. and just bcuz things may not b going well, it will eventually work out even if it takes awhile. lik a big cycle. but thats how life goes and personally i think life sucks but its just sumthing that u hav 2 get thru i guess. neways, i think that its a very emotional, questioning, (ummm theres another word 4 it 2 i just can think of it haha)...kind of poem. good stuff. :]]


  • happy kitty kat
    November 12, 2007
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    i like this one too, its like real thinkish

  • loving
    November 10, 2007

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    hey! just wanted to say that this is amazing. but all it takes is for you to really pray to God, and hell listen. if you really believe, you will see heavens marvelous light!


  • think of me x
    November 9, 2007

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    One suggestion I have is to change "And God ignores my very prayers" to "And God ignores my every prayer" but other than that, I like it.

    I'm not a religious person in the slightest, but I think there's a reason for everything. And I don't think that the entire world is spiteful and evil, it just seems that way.

    Maybe your purpose is to brighten it up with a smile and working your hardest. You'd be amazed the impact it has on people around you <3

    • Lost Emo
      November 9, 2007
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      thxs for the comment and i will take your advice. ty

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