Together forever
With you in my arms
We will prove
Love last for all time
Nothing will tear us apart
Years gone by
She comes along
Our love broken
Left in shambles
Into her arms you run
So much pain
In what is left
Of this heart
You once loved
But that was long ago
You tore my feeling
Like I had none
And as you move on
I’m too afraid to love
For it all I hate you
A contest entry
- {♥L/o/v/e&&D\a\r\k\n\e\s\s♥} by BrokenDawn.
525 points, ended November 23, 2007, 29 entries
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Comments
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Powerful...the emotion in this is real and raw bravo! i particularly liked how you ended this, "I’m too afraid to love
For it all I hate you " Great!
Goodluck
~dawn♥
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