pale porcelain smiles
and eyes
like crystal morning dew
your k.i.s.s.e.s.
{nourishing rain}
the ocean of the night
opens up
to you and me
[a possibility]
a violet storm
rolls over the city
thunder breaks
[an explosive symphony]
the euphony of showers
the sweet harmony
[of our movements]
in rhythm with the
//s.o.u.n.d.s.\\
{let's lay in the rain
.smilethroughtears.}
----oh, how beautifully ironic
it all is----
we are fluid
in this
((cinematic trance))
our laughter
||||| e c h o e s ||||
through this i.N.t.O.x.I.c.A.t.E.d.
evening
& your hair
*glistens* with raindrops
i am plastered on the ground
[nexttoyou]
.
.
.
.
.
when looking at the sky
{ i have blinders on to the world }.
Author notes
for the contest: I LOVE THE BIG BLUE!!!
this quote came to mind while writing this:
"once you have flown, you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skyward; there you have been, there you long to return" ~ leonardo da vinci
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty Contest by Innocent Evil.
700 points, ended January 5, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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well done here. enjoyed this piece.
best wishes in 2008.
great job
tory
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great!!! its wonderful!!
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i like the fact that your dirty pretty is still as elegant and beautiful as your other writes, just with that little added flavore. great && graceful dirty pretty write, not many people manage to pull it off so well.
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