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Puddle

In shades of quiet blue
The water sparkles
With the faintest glimmers
Of your mind's deepest closets
What figures do you see
Floating vajuely without form
In the wayward shine
Of the murky puddle's secrets
Stumbling through the vast expanse
Of finite infinity
You look inside and find yourself
To your surprise
A dark daydream darts
Across your crystalline eyes
Before your face is shattered
By the careless steps
Of a shadowy stranger
To see everything in nothing
To see hope for someone long gone
Are we all fools to be living
Is our existence all wrong

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