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The Snake

fake snake
on the teacher’s chair
LM giggles

wisdom’s eye
glares at class clown
LJ speechless

teacher’s gossip
floats from the next room
lunch detention

crumpled note in class
“Thank you for not telling”
engraved with hearts

A contest entry

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  • Heavens Child
    May 4, 2008
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    Very nicely written. Friendships are an incredibly powerful thing.


  • Mirthryl
    November 23, 2007

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    Sweet story of someone willing to take another's punishment for friendship's sake. I enjoyed this!


  • Pollycheck
    November 9, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry into my contest. I love it anothe one for my LJ/LM. Thank you so much for your contribution to better all of mankind.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    LOL this was a great little write here, I love your haiku of course but I liked the way you told the story

    Karen


  • Melissa Burns
    November 9, 2007
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    Cute & Sweet!

    Very cute poem! I love it very much!

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