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icy road

campagnolo, carbon frame

paralyzed

more for the cycling crowd - Campagnolo top line component for racing bikes, and carbon lightest material for frame

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  • Amarige
    January 6, 2008

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    Very impressing Haiku form I believe..not sure what to get from this though but I can interpret it my own way..thinking that even with all new technologies and science there is still mysteries unsolved in this world..maybe I read too deep into it..I guess I should just think of it as the cycling crowd would ...Great piece..you are such an amazing and very clever writer
    Amarige


  • cherche -d -ame
    December 17, 2007

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    Don't you know a personal bycicle mechanic? They should be able to "unfreeze" that carbon frame of the bike as well as the chill of your soul that speaks volumes in this [to me anyway]

    reenie


  • sultan gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    My impression ...

    I’m feeling a lack of progress in life … but a lot of balance … yet, still helpless to change things


  • haikumonk gold member
    November 9, 2007
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    LOLL.... a modern haiku...... very cool!!!!