The Wall that I've built surrounds
My wold that's made of glass
Cracking, Shattering, Breaking
With each person I've trusted not to hurt me,
But more so with each one that has
And he's doing the best he can
To mend the peices of my broken heart
But that doesn't change the wall
Blocking out the negativity
Gaurded by the monsters of my dreams
and the words that are my weapons
Pull me ahead in the Arms Race
That created the first chink
In my world that's made of glass
Author notes
ChristinaXCuriosity
A contest entry
- Your Best Prewrite 2 by Heavenly Angel.
450 points, ended December 10, 2007, 39 entries
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Comments
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wow... i can really relate to this... where you were hurt so much by so many people that when someone truly cares about you, you cant see it and think they will hurt you too.
anyway, great job and best of luck in this contest!
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thank you
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Very intense
A fine sharing in this contest
Thank you for being a part of this! All the best!
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