Dreams alive
divine unity
breaths from
sigh to sigh...
Heaven found
in the
middle
where kindred spirits
dance
entwine
and mingle
In a list
A contest entry
- When Poetry Embraces As Kindred Sigh by kaibab.
1125 points, ended November 10, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice you tried something different and I think it was pretty good.
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Very tender and soft spoken poetry. really enjoyed this poem. Excellent fab job on the prompt!!! WOW loved it completely!! Dazzling delightful and enjoyable!!! Best to you in the contest!
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I love this, such delicate rhyme and beautiful message, loves "Heaven found
in the
middle"
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This is such a lovely piece. Serenity in a poetic breath unraveled. Such a great write of poignancy!
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Circlew breathes her panting secret
as distant inner trembling canyon
whose deep red walls are stained love echoes
waiting for my ears to paint them...thanks so much
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I love this 'Heaven found in the middle' as a poem meets its reader, very beautiful
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Soft, gentle and sensual
perfection, suits my feelings to a 'T'
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excellent~
From sad sighs...
To heavenly delight...
Dancing in the end...
Penned perfect sis and best of luck in the contest...
Hugs
Susan~~~
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A slow sigh,gently emmitted.
Poetry can bring delight,
enliven even the gloomiest night,
leave your senses clear and bright,
a sigh at the wonderful insight.
youve caught the feel, the inner glow
that writing gives,
thats all I know.
enjoyed I say again , 'tis true
and best wishes in the comp. to you.
alan. ( sneaked in from the garden to read some more, should head back out to do a chore ((not a chore really, enjoyable stuff)) )
Alan.
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